The Meet up

[DRAGON LORD]

Though we were in love
The lust came as expected
When we become too close
It happens
May be what i would like
May be it boost the relation

When we fall in love
Lust was not in the scenario
It was not like something i
Anticipated this way
First we started talking
Little by little we came to
Know each other

Then there was the face of
Quarrel and agony
One will do the irritation
Many times we may
Keep silent for hours
Many time we might quarrel
For silly things

Then there come the next
Stage i don't want to do
That quarrel since
Sometimes i hurt her unknowingly
So when she gets hurts
She becomes silent

Then we talked for hours
There may be questions
What are you talking this much
Really i too don't know the
Answer and its the truth
We may be talking on things
That never mattered

But we like to be in once company
So talked things just
For time being
Then there comes a day
She asked can we meet
I was like yaa sure
Why not
When, were
She smiled and said
Were you would like
To spend time with me

After quite a while thinking
I said we can have a day in
The middle of forest
Were we can quarrel and
Can fight no one going to come
I thought she will disagree
But to my surprise she said yes

And then the day came
We met in the place which
Was decided as
She came in lavender colored
Dress looking like an angel from
Sky and having a smile on face
I think she was little trembling
She was in little fear

But after a few minutes of
Talking it all faded
She started her natural
Method teasing me as all
She like to do in while
Then we moved to the
Treehut were the booking was
Made and we have our food together

Talked on things
That i don't even know
Then i asked can i lay on her laps
She said yes why not
And i lay in her laps looking
To her eyes and still talking

The sun was setting and
She looked like
So cute to have with
And then there was rain
That which i never thought of
When nature starts to support
You it will have ts ways to
Make you one
She fears the lightening and thunder
That i came to know when she
Hugged me tightly in
Fear of thunder and that
Was when the time stopped........

 

[nandini00]

Though we were in love
The lust came as expected
When we become too close
It happens
May be what i would like
May be it boost the relation

When we fall in love
Lust was not in the scenario
It was not like something i
Anticipated this way
First we started talking
Little by little we came to
Know each other

Then there was the face of
Quarrel and agony
One will do the irritation
Many times we may
Keep silent for hours
Many time we might quarrel
For silly things

Then there come the next
Stage i don't want to do
That quarrel since
Sometimes i hurt her unknowingly
So when she gets hurts
She becomes silent

Then we talked for hours
There may be questions
What are you talking this much
Really i too don't know the
Answer and its the truth
We may be talking on things
That never mattered

But we like to be in once company
So talked things just
For time being
Then there comes a day
She asked can we meet
I was like yaa sure
Why not
When, were
She smiled and said
Were you would like
To spend time with me

After quite a while thinking
I said we can have a day in
The middle of forest
Were we can quarrel and
Can fight no one going to come
I thought she will disagree
But to my surprise she said yes

And then the day came
We met in the place which
Was decided as
She came in lavender colored
Dress looking like an angel from
Sky and having a smile on face
I think she was little trembling
She was in little fear

But after a few minutes of
Talking it all faded
She started her natural
Method teasing me as all
She like to do in while
Then we moved to the
Treehut were the booking was
Made and we have our food together

Talked on things
That i don't even know
Then i asked can i lay on her laps
She said yes why not
And i lay in her laps looking
To her eyes and still talking

The sun was setting and
She looked like
So cute to have with
And then there was rain
That which i never thought of
When nature starts to support
You it will have ts ways to
Make you one
She fears the lightening and thunder
That i came to know when she
Hugged me tightly in
Fear of thunder and that
Was when the time stopped........

I really enjoyed reading this. What touched me most wasn't the mention of love or even lust—it was the journey you described.
You beautifully showed how a relationship grows: from strangers, to endless conversations, to silly fights, to understanding each other's silence, and finally to finding comfort in each other's presence. The little details—resting on her lap, talking for hours about nothing, her teasing, her fear of thunder, and the instinctive hug—made the emotions feel genuine and alive.
I also liked how you portrayed lust not as the beginning of the relationship, but as something that naturally followed trust, affection, and emotional closeness. That perspective made the poem feel mature and heartfelt rather than superficial.
My favorite line wasn't a single sentence, but the feeling that "time stopped" when she hugged you in fear. It captured the idea that love is often found in small, unplanned moments rather than grand declarations.
A beautiful piece filled with warmth, innocence, and honest emotions. Keep writing—your strength lies in turning ordinary moments into memories that readers can genuinely feel.

 

[DRAGON LORD]

I really enjoyed reading this. What touched me most wasn't the mention of love or even lust—it was the journey you described.
You beautifully showed how a relationship grows: from strangers, to endless conversations, to silly fights, to understanding each other's silence, and finally to finding comfort in each other's presence. The little details—resting on her lap, talking for hours about nothing, her teasing, her fear of thunder, and the instinctive hug—made the emotions feel genuine and alive.
I also liked how you portrayed lust not as the beginning of the relationship, but as something that naturally followed trust, affection, and emotional closeness. That perspective made the poem feel mature and heartfelt rather than superficial.
My favorite line wasn't a single sentence, but the feeling that "time stopped" when she hugged you in fear. It captured the idea that love is often found in small, unplanned moments rather than grand declarations.
A beautiful piece filled with warmth, innocence, and honest emotions. Keep writing—your strength lies in turning ordinary moments into memories that readers can genuinely feel.

thank you

 

[Anshhi]

Though we were in love
The lust came as expected
When we become too close
It happens
May be what i would like
May be it boost the relation

When we fall in love
Lust was not in the scenario
It was not like something i
Anticipated this way
First we started talking
Little by little we came to
Know each other

Then there was the face of
Quarrel and agony
One will do the irritation
Many times we may
Keep silent for hours
Many time we might quarrel
For silly things

Then there come the next
Stage i don't want to do
That quarrel since
Sometimes i hurt her unknowingly
So when she gets hurts
She becomes silent

Then we talked for hours
There may be questions
What are you talking this much
Really i too don't know the
Answer and its the truth
We may be talking on things
That never mattered

But we like to be in once company
So talked things just
For time being
Then there comes a day
She asked can we meet
I was like yaa sure
Why not
When, were
She smiled and said
Were you would like
To spend time with me

After quite a while thinking
I said we can have a day in
The middle of forest
Were we can quarrel and
Can fight no one going to come
I thought she will disagree
But to my surprise she said yes

And then the day came
We met in the place which
Was decided as
She came in lavender colored
Dress looking like an angel from
Sky and having a smile on face
I think she was little trembling
She was in little fear

But after a few minutes of
Talking it all faded
She started her natural
Method teasing me as all
She like to do in while
Then we moved to the
Treehut were the booking was
Made and we have our food together

Talked on things
That i don't even know
Then i asked can i lay on her laps
She said yes why not
And i lay in her laps looking
To her eyes and still talking

The sun was setting and
She looked like
So cute to have with
And then there was rain
That which i never thought of
When nature starts to support
You it will have ts ways to
Make you one
She fears the lightening and thunder
That i came to know when she
Hugged me tightly in
Fear of thunder and that
Was when the time stopped........

Absolutely true. Although the beginning of love is simple, it's only natural for the intensity of emotions and affection to grow once you become close. Beautifully written!

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