Tere jane ke baad ?!

[✧ Augite ✧]

"Tere jaane ke baad se meri zindagi ek tanhai ki kahani ban gayi hai. Har pal, har din, har raat, sab kuch tere bina adhoora hai. Main tere saath bitaye palon ko yaad karti hoon, aur tere bina har pal ko rone mein bitati hoon. Mere dil ki dhadkan tujhe paane ki tamanna thi, lekin ab tere bina har dhadkan dard bhari hai. Meri duniya tere ishq mein bhula gayi thi, lekin ab tere bina meri duniya adhoori hai. Main tere saath jeena chahti thi, tere saath marna chahti thi, lekin ab tere bina jeena hi meri zindagi hai. Tere bina har pal ek tanhai hai, har raat ek aansoo hai, har din ek dard hai. Meri zindagi tere bina kuch bhi nahi hai, bas ek tanhai ki kahani hai."

 

[Samshady]

"Tere jaane ke baad se meri zindagi ek tanhai ki kahani ban gayi hai. Har pal, har din, har raat, sab kuch tere bina adhoora hai. Main tere saath bitaye palon ko yaad karti hoon, aur tere bina har pal ko rone mein bitati hoon. Mere dil ki dhadkan tujhe paane ki tamanna thi, lekin ab tere bina har dhadkan dard bhari hai. Meri duniya tere ishq mein bhula gayi thi, lekin ab tere bina meri duniya adhoori hai. Main tere saath jeena chahti thi, tere saath marna chahti thi, lekin ab tere bina jeena hi meri zindagi hai. Tere bina har pal ek tanhai hai, har raat ek aansoo hai, har din ek dard hai. Meri zindagi tere bina kuch bhi nahi hai, bas ek tanhai ki kahani hai."

kya khoob likha hai
dard ko aksharo mai mast sajaya hai

 

[Anshhi]

"Tere jaane ke baad se meri zindagi ek tanhai ki kahani ban gayi hai. Har pal, har din, har raat, sab kuch tere bina adhoora hai. Main tere saath bitaye palon ko yaad karti hoon, aur tere bina har pal ko rone mein bitati hoon. Mere dil ki dhadkan tujhe paane ki tamanna thi, lekin ab tere bina har dhadkan dard bhari hai. Meri duniya tere ishq mein bhula gayi thi, lekin ab tere bina meri duniya adhoori hai. Main tere saath jeena chahti thi, tere saath marna chahti thi, lekin ab tere bina jeena hi meri zindagi hai. Tere bina har pal ek tanhai hai, har raat ek aansoo hai, har din ek dard hai. Meri zindagi tere bina kuch bhi nahi hai, bas ek tanhai ki kahani hai."

Very beautiful! A deep pain is hidden in every word.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[Somaiya Karn]

Tere jaane ke baad
Wo suhani saam nhi ayi
subah ki muskaan nhi ayi

Aayi kayi Holi ,par rango mai
Tumhre sath rangne ki paigaam nhi ayi,

Rachi mehndi tere jane ke baad bhi
Pahle wali rang nhi ayi.

Saji thi aaj bhi mai barsho baad
Tere sath sajne wali wo noor nhi ayi,wo noor nhi ayi

Tere baad ab sawan bhi Sukhi lgti h Tere sath 4 bund bhi suhani thi

 

[Ashura24]

"Tere jaane ke baad se meri zindagi ek tanhai ki kahani ban gayi hai. Har pal, har din, har raat, sab kuch tere bina adhoora hai. Main tere saath bitaye palon ko yaad karti hoon, aur tere bina har pal ko rone mein bitati hoon. Mere dil ki dhadkan tujhe paane ki tamanna thi, lekin ab tere bina har dhadkan dard bhari hai. Meri duniya tere ishq mein bhula gayi thi, lekin ab tere bina meri duniya adhoori hai. Main tere saath jeena chahti thi, tere saath marna chahti thi, lekin ab tere bina jeena hi meri zindagi hai. Tere bina har pal ek tanhai hai, har raat ek aansoo hai, har din ek dard hai. Meri zindagi tere bina kuch bhi nahi hai, bas ek tanhai ki kahani hai."

Bohot acha likha he yaar , bohot dino ke bad kuch dard wala padh raha hu ,ak ak word acha laga aur woh words dard samja rahe he .