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My First Attempt...

Nemo

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He walked down the street, the rain beating heavy and relentlessly. Nothing him and the rain, and the soaking wet clothes he wore. It was then he saw her, the first ever glimpse, his breath hitched and his eyes followed. Stood rooted to the spot, in awe, mesmerised, enchanted, dumbstruck...

She walked through the rain, confidence in every step, her hips swayed, but her black dress was stuck to her, enhancing her every curve. Her heels with a soft clack on the pavement as she walked, she stopped and glanced around, and there eyes met. Under the street lights across the road from each other, they stared at each other.

He saw a tall beautiful elegant woman, long reddish brown hair, stuck to her face like, blue eyes, full lips and a refined jawline. She saw a tall man with with an oh so perfect physique, his open coat showing his t-shirt clinging to his chest and abs, she bit her lips. Looking up she saw his rugged features, short light brown hair, light grey eyes, and thin lips accentuated by the perfect cut lines of his beard.

Both taking a deep breath, looked left to right before stepping on to the road and meeting in the middle. Heavy breaths dampened by the heavy rainfall as they looked deep into each others eyes, the spark, the palpitations already obvious.

Slowly and nervously he moved his hand forward, not wanting to break eye contact, he offered his hand to hers. With a soft husky voice he simply said, "My place, or yours?"

Her eyes wide, his voice, his steely gaze, the gentle touch of his hands, licking her lips she whispered... "Yours."

Holding her hand with a gentle firmness, he walked not even a few paces forward, before turning and walking up a small garden to his house, opening the front door he let her inside first. Closing the door behind him, he stepped forward taking his coat off and hanging it on the peg, the rain dripping on to the floor by his feet, he turned and she stepped closer, so close there bodies almost touched.

Reaching up she gently traced her fingers against his beard, biting her lip, she slowly looked down from his eyes falling on his lips, she stood on her tiptoes, her lips brushed against his.

As smitten as he was, he didn't kiss her, no not yet... Instead he swooped her up in his arms, his muscles tensing and flexing as he carried her up the stairs. Her breath hitched, she wrapped her arms around his neck, curious but feeling safe. Her lust reaching ever climbing.

He carried her into the master bedroom, there behind a partitioned wall was a large roll-top bath, and a large luxurious full body shower, he walked forward and turned the shower on, glancing over his shoulder his back to her he stripped his soaking wet clothes off.

She got the hint, there was no need to be subtle, she didn't hesitate, undoing the zip on the back of her dress she wriggled out of it, letting it drop to the floor in a heap by her feet, she pulled her lace panties off slowly, watching his every move.

He stepped into the shower, his body a silhouette through the steamed glass, she could make out his pecs, his stomach, then her eyes widened as she saw his already hard cock.

Her pert breasts bounced with every slow purposeful step, her nipples hard and erect, opening the shower she stood before him, His cock already twitching, as he looked her up and down.

Offering his hand for her she stepped in to the shower, he moved, suddenly pulling her arms above her head pinning them against the wall, his body pressed against hers. His voice husky with lust and desire, "Amelia, I want... you!" Before she could speak he leaned forward kissing her lips with intense passion.

Amelia melted into his grinding her hips against his hard cock. Moments later they broke their kiss breathing heavy. Looking him in his eyes, she seductively responds, "Well Michael, what are you waiting for?"
 
Gosh… it’s so seductive. But what I truly loved is the simplicity in the language. I’m a huge fan of simple words. As someone who’s not an expert, simple terminology makes all the difference—I can actually understand and feel it. Keep writing..!!
 
Nemo nemo nemo...

Simple... elaborate... Bringing attention to every minute detail... Stand out in all your writings.

We could do a bit more on the backstory maybe?
 
Michael kissed along her jawline, slowly down her neck, his hands sliding down her outstretched arms. Kissing along her collarbone and down her chest. He looked up, eyes full of lust and desire.

Amelia moaned softly, arching her back, pushing her breasts into his face. Michael's nose brushed against her hard erect nipples. He kissed them gingerly as Amelia brushed her hands through his hair. "Mmm, yes Michael... oh yes!" She moaned.

Michael's hand grabbed her pert breasts, squeezing them as he rolled her nipples between his fingers, kissing them slowly teasing.

Amelia's arousal pooling between her legs, her breath hitching as her body trembled, she grabbed his holding him firmly, forcefully pressing his mouth against her nipples, and Michael complied, without hesitation, he started to suck her nipples hungrily. His hands sliding up and down her body, as the hot shower water cascaded over them both.

His hands slid down her wet stomach, sliding between her legs, his fingers rubbing against her clitoris and labia. Amelia's moans getting louder and louder. Now it was Michael's turn, he pulled away from her luscious pert breasts, kissed down her stomach, until he was eventually there, his face right between her legs. Lifting one of her legs over his shoulder, Amelia stretched her arms out one hand on the shower glass, the other on the tiled wall to steady herself as Michael dived in without hesitation, sucking her clitoris with fervent hunger...

Amelia's eyes rolled, as she hooked her leg against his neck moaning loudly with pleasure, "Oh, FUCK YES!!"
 
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Oh la la.. delicious Nemo .."Your place or mine" is super cliche.. how about "I've a perfect bath for you to soak in at my place, if you'd like to get out of the rain".. or some such... Otherwise, very arousing! xoxox
 
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He walked down the street, the rain beating heavy and relentlessly. Nothing him and the rain, and the soaking wet clothes he wore. It was then he saw her, the first ever glimpse, his breath hitched and his eyes followed. Stood rooted to the spot, in awe, mesmerised, enchanted, dumbstruck...

She walked through the rain, confidence in every step, her hips swayed, but her black dress was stuck to her, enhancing her every curve. Her heels with a soft clack on the pavement as she walked, she stopped and glanced around, and there eyes met. Under the street lights across the road from each other, they stared at each other.

He saw a tall beautiful elegant woman, long reddish brown hair, stuck to her face like, blue eyes, full lips and a refined jawline. She saw a tall man with with an oh so perfect physique, his open coat showing his t-shirt clinging to his chest and abs, she bit her lips. Looking up she saw his rugged features, short light brown hair, light grey eyes, and thin lips accentuated by the perfect cut lines of his beard.

Both taking a deep breath, looked left to right before stepping on to the road and meeting in the middle. Heavy breaths dampened by the heavy rainfall as they looked deep into each others eyes, the spark, the palpitations already obvious.

Slowly and nervously he moved his hand forward, not wanting to break eye contact, he offered his hand to hers. With a soft husky voice he simply said, "My place, or yours?"

Her eyes wide, his voice, his steely gaze, the gentle touch of his hands, licking her lips she whispered... "Yours."

Holding her hand with a gentle firmness, he walked not even a few paces forward, before turning and walking up a small garden to his house, opening the front door he let her inside first. Closing the door behind him, he stepped forward taking his coat off and hanging it on the peg, the rain dripping on to the floor by his feet, he turned and she stepped closer, so close there bodies almost touched.

Reaching up she gently traced her fingers against his beard, biting her lip, she slowly looked down from his eyes falling on his lips, she stood on her tiptoes, her lips brushed against his.

As smitten as he was, he didn't kiss her, no not yet... Instead he swooped her up in his arms, his muscles tensing and flexing as he carried her up the stairs. Her breath hitched, she wrapped her arms around his neck, curious but feeling safe. Her lust reaching ever climbing.

He carried her into the master bedroom, there behind a partitioned wall was a large roll-top bath, and a large luxurious full body shower, he walked forward and turned the shower on, glancing over his shoulder his back to her he stripped his soaking wet clothes off.

She got the hint, there was no need to be subtle, she didn't hesitate, undoing the zip on the back of her dress she wriggled out of it, letting it drop to the floor in a heap by her feet, she pulled her lace panties off slowly, watching his every move.

He stepped into the shower, his body a silhouette through the steamed glass, she could make out his pecs, his stomach, then her eyes widened as she saw his already hard cock.

Her pert breasts bounced with every slow purposeful step, her nipples hard and erect, opening the shower she stood before him, His cock already twitching, as he looked her up and down.

Offering his hand for her she stepped in to the shower, he moved, suddenly pulling her arms above her head pinning them against the wall, his body pressed against hers. His voice husky with lust and desire, "Amelia, I want... you!" Before she could speak he leaned forward kissing her lips with intense passion.

Amelia melted into his grinding her hips against his hard cock. Moments later they broke their kiss breathing heavy. Looking him in his eyes, she seductively responds, "Well Michael, what are you waiting for?"
Michael kissed along her jawline, slowly down her neck, his hands sliding down her outstretched arms. Kissing along her collarbone and down her chest. He looked up, eyes full of lust and desire.

Amelia moaned softly, arching her back, pushing her breasts into his face. Michael's nose brushed against her hard erect nipples. He kissed them gingerly as Amelia brushed her hands through his hair. "Mmm, yes Michael... oh yes!" She moaned.

Michael's hand grabbed her pert breasts, squeezing them as he rolled her nipples between his fingers, kissing them slowly teasing.

Amelia's arousal pooling between her legs, her breath hitching as her body trembled, she grabbed his holding him firmly, forcefully pressing his mouth against her nipples, and Michael complied, without hesitation, he started to suck her nipples hungrily. His hands sliding up and down her body, as the hot shower water cascaded over them both.

His hands slid down her wet stomach, sliding between her legs, his fingers rubbing against her clitoris and labia. Amelia's moans getting louder and louder. Now it was Michael's turn, he pulled away from her luscious pert breasts, kissed down her stomach, until he was eventually there, his face right between her legs. Lifting one of her legs over his shoulder, Amelia stretched her arms out one hand on the shower glass, the other on the tiled wall to steady herself as Michael dived in without hesitation, sucking her clitoris with fervent hunger...

Amelia's eyes rolled, as she hooked her leg against his neck moaning loudly with pleasure, "Oh, FUCK YES!!"
It seems ,without any formal intro , both address each other by respective names means they both know each other before they crossed path today. If , they dont, I didnt know its so easy wearing coat n T-shirt ,walking in rains , could be so lucky experience. Little scared ,if I am in that situation n I ask that directly , "my place or , yours," would it be same reaction the way happened to @Nemo or any possibilities of something worst. Rainy season is knocking door. Sure I would take risk. Nemo's experience says , its worth taking risk. Anyway , sorry @Nemo ,I carried away reading your marvelous experience. Really its very motivating to simple shy guys like me. Please keep sharing other experience too. Its like guideline to we naïve guys. Keep enlightening us. :smoking:
 
It seems ,without any formal intro , both address each other by respective names means they both know each other before they crossed path today. If , they dont, I didnt know its so easy wearing coat n T-shirt ,walking in rains , could be so lucky experience. Little scared ,if I am in that situation n I ask that directly , "my place or , yours," would it be same reaction the way happened to @Nemo or any possibilities of something worst. Rainy season is knocking door. Sure I would take risk. Nemo's experience says , its worth taking risk. Anyway , sorry @Nemo ,I carried away reading your marvelous experience. Really its very motivating to simple shy guys like me. Please keep sharing other experience too. Its like guideline to we naïve guys. Keep enlightening us
this isn't an experience of mine, not in a long shot... although I can't lie, I wish it was. This is just something that I randomly wrote, very impromptu it is.

Thank you for your comments
 
It seems ,without any formal intro , both address each other by respective names means they both know each other before they crossed path today. If , they dont, I didnt know its so easy wearing coat n T-shirt ,walking in rains , could be so lucky experience. Little scared ,if I am in that situation n I ask that directly , "my place or , yours," would it be same reaction the way happened to @Nemo or any possibilities of something worst. Rainy season is knocking door. Sure I would take risk. Nemo's experience says , its worth taking risk. Anyway , sorry @Nemo ,I carried away reading your marvelous experience. Really its very motivating to simple shy guys like me. Please keep sharing other experience too. Its like guideline to we naïve guys. Keep enlightening us. :smoking:
Try at your own risk while also be prepared for the worst !
:rofl1:
 
this isn't an experience of mine, not in a long shot... although I can't lie, I wish it was. This is just something that I randomly wrote, very impromptu it is.

Thank you for your comments
Thats the difference. You narrated in a way , it looks like you just finished your task with Amelia. Your writing made everyone excited to follow path Michael taken. I am sure , you have that guts' to turn it into reality , the way you have plot in mind. Appreciate it. Keep it up. You keep writing story n let s take it as your real experience by your amazing writings. :cool:
 
`I have learned ,risk is always there to achieve big task. One has to face boldly.:nerdy: Prepared for the worst?:sad1::cool:
Being fellow Forum user, at least should have sympathy wishing , hope you would get success instead of saying, "prepared for the worst. ":mad:
 
He walked down the street, the rain beating heavy and relentlessly. Nothing him and the rain, and the soaking wet clothes he wore. It was then he saw her, the first ever glimpse, his breath hitched and his eyes followed. Stood rooted to the spot, in awe, mesmerised, enchanted, dumbstruck...

She walked through the rain, confidence in every step, her hips swayed, but her black dress was stuck to her, enhancing her every curve. Her heels with a soft clack on the pavement as she walked, she stopped and glanced around, and there eyes met. Under the street lights across the road from each other, they stared at each other.

He saw a tall beautiful elegant woman, long reddish brown hair, stuck to her face like, blue eyes, full lips and a refined jawline. She saw a tall man with with an oh so perfect physique, his open coat showing his t-shirt clinging to his chest and abs, she bit her lips. Looking up she saw his rugged features, short light brown hair, light grey eyes, and thin lips accentuated by the perfect cut lines of his beard.

Both taking a deep breath, looked left to right before stepping on to the road and meeting in the middle. Heavy breaths dampened by the heavy rainfall as they looked deep into each others eyes, the spark, the palpitations already obvious.

Slowly and nervously he moved his hand forward, not wanting to break eye contact, he offered his hand to hers. With a soft husky voice he simply said, "My place, or yours?"

Her eyes wide, his voice, his steely gaze, the gentle touch of his hands, licking her lips she whispered... "Yours."

Holding her hand with a gentle firmness, he walked not even a few paces forward, before turning and walking up a small garden to his house, opening the front door he let her inside first. Closing the door behind him, he stepped forward taking his coat off and hanging it on the peg, the rain dripping on to the floor by his feet, he turned and she stepped closer, so close there bodies almost touched.

Reaching up she gently traced her fingers against his beard, biting her lip, she slowly looked down from his eyes falling on his lips, she stood on her tiptoes, her lips brushed against his.

As smitten as he was, he didn't kiss her, no not yet... Instead he swooped her up in his arms, his muscles tensing and flexing as he carried her up the stairs. Her breath hitched, she wrapped her arms around his neck, curious but feeling safe. Her lust reaching ever climbing.

He carried her into the master bedroom, there behind a partitioned wall was a large roll-top bath, and a large luxurious full body shower, he walked forward and turned the shower on, glancing over his shoulder his back to her he stripped his soaking wet clothes off.

She got the hint, there was no need to be subtle, she didn't hesitate, undoing the zip on the back of her dress she wriggled out of it, letting it drop to the floor in a heap by her feet, she pulled her lace panties off slowly, watching his every move.

He stepped into the shower, his body a silhouette through the steamed glass, she could make out his pecs, his stomach, then her eyes widened as she saw his already hard cock.

Her pert breasts bounced with every slow purposeful step, her nipples hard and erect, opening the shower she stood before him, His cock already twitching, as he looked her up and down.

Offering his hand for her she stepped in to the shower, he moved, suddenly pulling her arms above her head pinning them against the wall, his body pressed against hers. His voice husky with lust and desire, "Amelia, I want... you!" Before she could speak he leaned forward kissing her lips with intense passion.

Amelia melted into his grinding her hips against his hard cock. Moments later they broke their kiss breathing heavy. Looking him in his eyes, she seductively responds, "Well Michael, what are you waiting for?"
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I can't help but doing it while reading the story!! Damn it's erotic!!
 
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