Halku ka Bojh...!!!

[CuteBubble]

Fir aayi hai poos ki raat
Gaadhe ki chaadar mein lipata,
dhadhakate seet se simata,
Premachand ka deen heen "halku"
Baitha hai baans ke ussi khatole par,
Jis par baitha hua tha tab,
Munshi ji ne usko racha tha jab !
Khatole ke neeche hai jhabaroo,
Jiski chir niyati hai,
Halku ke sath raat katana,
Uske akaant ko bantana !
Lagaan vasool karne ko kaash
Uss baras "sehana" na aaya hota,
Aur byaaj chukaane ke bajaay,
Halku ek kambal le aaya hota !
Magar tab kaun jaanta usse ?
Bevajah kyon pehchanta usse ?
Seet ki uss raat agar,
Jhabaroo se lipatkar vo na sota,
To kya aaj halku, halku hota ?
Seet ki uss sard raat ka bojh,
Halku aaj tak utha raha hai !
Sehana ka jo karj bacha tha,
Usse ab tak chuka raha hai !
Halku ke paas aaj bhi,
Tan dhaankane ko kambal nahin hai !
Zameendaar beshak badal gaya hai,
Magar karj wahin ka wahin hai !
Kisaan bana rehne ko halku,
Tamaam koshisein kar raha hai !
Fasal ka daam beshak na mile,
Halku khet par Zaade mein mar raha hai !

 

[The_LionHeart❤️]

Fir aayi hai poos ki raat
Gaadhe ki chaadar mein lipata,
dhadhakate seet se simata,
Premachand ka deen heen "halku"
Baitha hai baans ke ussi khatole par,
Jis par baitha hua tha tab,
Munshi ji ne usko racha tha jab !
Khatole ke neeche hai jhabaroo,
Jiski chir niyati hai,
Halku ke sath raat katana,
Uske akaant ko bantana !
Lagaan vasool karne ko kaash
Uss baras "sehana" na aaya hota,
Aur byaaj chukaane ke bajaay,
Halku ek kambal le aaya hota !
Magar tab kaun jaanta usse ?
Bevajah kyon pehchanta usse ?
Seet ki uss raat agar,
Jhabaroo se lipatkar vo na sota,
To kya aaj halku, halku hota ?
Seet ki uss sard raat ka bojh,
Halku aaj tak utha raha hai !
Sehana ka jo karj bacha tha,
Usse ab tak chuka raha hai !
Halku ke paas aaj bhi,
Tan dhaankane ko kambal nahin hai !
Zameendaar beshak badal gaya hai,
Magar karj wahin ka wahin hai !
Kisaan bana rehne ko halku,
Tamaam koshisein kar raha hai !
Fasal ka daam beshak na mile,
Halku khet par Zaade mein mar raha hai !

Wah, Anchal! Tumhare shabdon mein itni gehraayi aur sachchai hai ki Premchand ke "Halku" ka dard aaj ke kisaan ke dard se jura hua mehsoos hota hai. Tumne jo tasveer khinchi hai, woh sirf ek katha nahi, balki ek vyatha hai, jo har us vyakti ko chhoo jaati hai jo dharti ke sapno ko apne khoon-paseene se sechanewale kisaan ka haal dekh raha hai.

Tumhare likhe alfazon mein samaj ka ek sach bayan hota hai — ek sach jo badalte zamane ke bawjood nahi badla. Jhabaroo ka halku ke dukh mein saath dena, aur sehana ka bojh ab tak utha raha halku, yeh tasveer itni jeevant lagti hai ki aisa lagta hai jaise vo kahani abhi bhi zinda hai. Tumhare shabdon ki maaram-mitti aur dard ka sangam bahut shandar hai!

Aise hi likhti raho. Tumhare kalam ki baat har dil tak zarur pahunchegi!

 

[CuteBubble]

Wah, Anchal! Tumhare shabdon mein itni gehraayi aur sachchai hai ki Premchand ke "Halku" ka dard aaj ke kisaan ke dard se jura hua mehsoos hota hai. Tumne jo tasveer khinchi hai, woh sirf ek katha nahi, balki ek vyatha hai, jo har us vyakti ko chhoo jaati hai jo dharti ke sapno ko apne khoon-paseene se sechanewale kisaan ka haal dekh raha hai.

Tumhare likhe alfazon mein samaj ka ek sach bayan hota hai — ek sach jo badalte zamane ke bawjood nahi badla. Jhabaroo ka halku ke dukh mein saath dena, aur sehana ka bojh ab tak utha raha halku, yeh tasveer itni jeevant lagti hai ki aisa lagta hai jaise vo kahani abhi bhi zinda hai. Tumhare shabdon ki maaram-mitti aur dard ka sangam bahut shandar hai!

Aise hi likhti raho. Tumhare kalam ki baat har dil tak zarur pahunchegi!

Shukriya jnaab...!!!
Bas diary ke panno mai utthl putthl macha rhi thi, kmbhkkt bhot kaam chor ho gaye hai...
Tab kisi kone mai dubki hui ye dikh gayi, jese isko aaj ka intzar tha...
Jaise marne wale ko mout ka.. Ki shukar hai ab mai apne khuda se to mil jaaunga.. Jaan jaati h to jaaye

 

[The_LionHeart❤️]

Shukriya jnaab...!!!
Bas diary ke panno mai utthl putthl macha rhi thi, kmbhkkt bhot kaam chor ho gaye hai...
Tab kisi kone mai dubki hui ye dikh gayi, jese isko aaj ka intzar tha...
Jaise marne wale ko mout ka.. Ki shukar hai ab mai apne khuda se to mil jaaunga.. Jaan jaati h to jaaye

Wah, Anchal! Tumhare alfaaz diary ke panno se nikal kar ek zinda tasveer ban jaate hain. Jo tumhari soch ke kone-kone se ubharte hain, unme ek ajeeb si kasak aur sukoon ka sangam hai. Ye "dubki hui" kavita, jaise tumhare andar ke jazbat ka intezaar kar rahi thi, ab apne asliyat ke saath chamak uthi hai.

Aur kya baat kahi tumne — "marne wale ko maut ka intezaar"! Kitna gehra aur maaynebhara tashbih diya hai. Jaise ek sookhi patti mausam ke hawa ka intezaar karti hai, waise hi tumhare alfaaz apni awaaz paane ke liye taraste hai. Tumhari diary bhi jaise zinda ho jaati hogi tumhare jazbaton ke saath.

Aisa lagta hai tumhari kalam bhi tumhare dil ke jazbaton ke saath ek raazdaan hai — kabhi dard ko apnati hai, kabhi sukoon ko. Bina kisi shikayat ke tumhare jazbat sambhalti hai. Tumhare shabdon mein ek alag hi roohaniyat hai, jo padne wale ke dil tak pahuchti hai.

Keep them coming, Anchal! Tumhari diary aur tumhari baatein dono hi khas hain.

 

[CuteBubble]

Wah, Anchal! Tumhare alfaaz diary ke panno se nikal kar ek zinda tasveer ban jaate hain. Jo tumhari soch ke kone-kone se ubharte hain, unme ek ajeeb si kasak aur sukoon ka sangam hai. Ye "dubki hui" kavita, jaise tumhare andar ke jazbat ka intezaar kar rahi thi, ab apne asliyat ke saath chamak uthi hai.

Aur kya baat kahi tumne — "marne wale ko maut ka intezaar"! Kitna gehra aur maaynebhara tashbih diya hai. Jaise ek sookhi patti mausam ke hawa ka intezaar karti hai, waise hi tumhare alfaaz apni awaaz paane ke liye taraste hai. Tumhari diary bhi jaise zinda ho jaati hogi tumhare jazbaton ke saath.

Aisa lagta hai tumhari kalam bhi tumhare dil ke jazbaton ke saath ek raazdaan hai — kabhi dard ko apnati hai, kabhi sukoon ko. Bina kisi shikayat ke tumhare jazbat sambhalti hai. Tumhare shabdon mein ek alag hi roohaniyat hai, jo padne wale ke dil tak pahuchti hai.

Keep them coming, Anchal! Tumhari diary aur tumhari baatein dono hi khas hain.

Shukriya itni taareef ke liye huzoor..!!!
Kalam ke bina mai aur mere bina kalam adhoori hai... Baat rahi diary ki to uski keemat dunia ki saari daulat shoharat se kai gunna jyada hai..
Diary k jism pr kalam ne jo pyar se rang ukkere hai usko "anchal" Ne dhkka hua hai... Wo anmol hai.

 

[The_LionHeart❤️]

Shukriya itni taareef ke liye huzoor..!!!
Kalam ke bina mai aur mere bina kalam adhoori hai... Baat rahi diary ki to uski keemat dunia ki saari daulat shoharat se kai gunna jyada hai..
Diary k jism pr kalam ne jo pyar se rang ukkere hai usko "anchal" Ne dhkka hua hai... Wo anmol hai.

Wah, Anchal ji! Aapke jazbat aur alfaaz ka jadu toh har baar dil ko chhoo leta hai. Aapki kalam aur diary ke beech jo rishta hai, wo sacchai aur mohabbat ka ek misaal hai. Sach kaha aapne, dunia ki daulat aur shohrat se kahin jyada keemti hoti hai wo diary, jisme aapke dil ke rang aur jazbat baste hain.

"Diary ke jism par kalam ne jo pyar se rang ukkere hai, usko 'Anchal' ne dhaakka hai" — ye baat to bas aap hi keh sakti thi, itni khoobsurti se. Aapka aur aapke shabdon ka rishta ek aise geet ki tarah hai jo kabhi purana nahi hota, hamesha dil ke kareeb rehta hai.

Aapki diary aur kalam anmol hai, par usse bhi anmol hai wo soch aur jazbat jo un pannon par sajte hain. Keep weaving your magic, Anchal ji. Har alfaaz mein aapki rooh bastee hai!

 

[CuteBubble]

Wah, Anchal ji! Aapke jazbat aur alfaaz ka jadu toh har baar dil ko chhoo leta hai. Aapki kalam aur diary ke beech jo rishta hai, wo sacchai aur mohabbat ka ek misaal hai. Sach kaha aapne, dunia ki daulat aur shohrat se kahin jyada keemti hoti hai wo diary, jisme aapke dil ke rang aur jazbat baste hain.

"Diary ke jism par kalam ne jo pyar se rang ukkere hai, usko 'Anchal' ne dhaakka hai" — ye baat to bas aap hi keh sakti thi, itni khoobsurti se. Aapka aur aapke shabdon ka rishta ek aise geet ki tarah hai jo kabhi purana nahi hota, hamesha dil ke kareeb rehta hai.

Aapki diary aur kalam anmol hai, par usse bhi anmol hai wo soch aur jazbat jo un pannon par sajte hain. Keep weaving your magic, Anchal ji. Har alfaaz mein aapki rooh bastee hai!

Koshish yahi hai ki likhu, likhu aur likhti rhi
Diary gar bol pati meri
Diary gar bol pati meri...
To seedha yahin kehti
Kmbhkkt jaan hi lele meri
Kmbhkkt jaan hi lele meri...
Kyun jism ko chhuti hai kalam se
Hontho se choone mai kya dushmani teri
Hontho se choone mai kya dushmani teri....

 

[The_LionHeart❤️]

Koshish yahi hai ki likhu, likhu aur likhti rhi
Diary gar bol pati meri
Diary gar bol pati meri...
To seedha yahin kehti
Kmbhkkt jaan hi lele meri
Kmbhkkt jaan hi lele meri...
Kyun jism ko chhuti hai kalam se
Hontho se choone mai kya dushmani teri
Hontho se choone mai kya dushmani teri....

Wah, Anchal ji! Kitne gehre aur masoom jazbat hai aapke is nazm mein. Aapki diary aur kalam ke beech ka yeh dard aur mohabbat ka rishta, jaise ek zinda kahani ban gaya ho.

"Diary gar bol pati meri, to seedha yahin kehti, kmbhkkt jaan hi lele meri" — kitni roohani baat hai! Jaise diary bhi apka dard aur khushi, dono ka saathi hai, aur uska shikayat karna bhi ek pyaar bhari taana hai. Aur woh "hontho se choone mai kya dushmani teri", iska matlab toh bas aapka kalam aur diary hi samajh sakte hain.

Yeh jazbaat, yeh mohabbat aur dard ka yeh sangam, aapke shabdon mein alag hi jaan dal deta hai. Aapki har nazm mein ek rooh ki aahat hoti hai. Likhti rahiye, kyunki shayad aapki diary bhi bas isi intezaar mein hai ki aap usse zinda rakhte raho.

 

[CuteBubble]

Wah, Anchal ji! Kitne gehre aur masoom jazbat hai aapke is nazm mein. Aapki diary aur kalam ke beech ka yeh dard aur mohabbat ka rishta, jaise ek zinda kahani ban gaya ho.

"Diary gar bol pati meri, to seedha yahin kehti, kmbhkkt jaan hi lele meri" — kitni roohani baat hai! Jaise diary bhi apka dard aur khushi, dono ka saathi hai, aur uska shikayat karna bhi ek pyaar bhari taana hai. Aur woh "hontho se choone mai kya dushmani teri", iska matlab toh bas aapka kalam aur diary hi samajh sakte hain.

Yeh jazbaat, yeh mohabbat aur dard ka yeh sangam, aapke shabdon mein alag hi jaan dal deta hai. Aapki har nazm mein ek rooh ki aahat hoti hai. Likhti rahiye, kyunki shayad aapki diary bhi bas isi intezaar mein hai ki aap usse zinda rakhte raho.

Shi pehchana aapne...
"Diary bol pati.. " Mtlb aese dukh ke pal uske sath saanjha kr liye ki mujhse jyda dard usko lag rha hai, jabki wo to be-jaan hai...
"Hontho se kya dushmani teri" Usme mene kuch behad sukh ke hasee pal bhi baant liye h.. To usko mujhse jyada pyaar umad aaya hai..
Be-jaan cheeje bhi kai bar kitni chchaa uthti hai.. Dekhne ki, smjhne ki baat hai bss

 

[The_LionHeart❤️]

Shi pehchana aapne...
"Diary bol pati.. " Mtlb aese dukh ke pal uske sath saanjha kr liye ki mujhse jyda dard usko lag rha hai, jabki wo to be-jaan hai...
"Hontho se kya dushmani teri" Usme mene kuch behad sukh ke hasee pal bhi baant liye h.. To usko mujhse jyada pyaar umad aaya hai..
Be-jaan cheeje bhi kai bar kitni chchaa uthti hai.. Dekhne ki, smjhne ki baat hai bss

Wah, Anchal ji! Aapke shabdon mein jo gehraai aur jazbat hai, usko samajhna ek safar jaisa lagta hai. Aapne "Diary bol pati" aur "Hontho se kya dushmani teri" ke peeche jo dard aur sukh chhupa hai, wo ekdum rooh tak jaata hai.

Sach mein, bejaan cheezein bhi tab jaan se bhar jaati hain jab unme hum apne jazbat gholein. Aapki diary toh aapka ek hissa ban chuki hai — ek raazdaan, ek dost, aur ek hamesha saath dene wali saathi. Shayad isiliye uska dard aur uska pyaar bhi aapke jazbat ka prateek ban jaata hai.

Aur yeh baat toh lajawab hai — "Be-jaan cheeje bhi kai baar kitni chhaa uthti hain." Bas dekhne aur mehsoos karne ka nazariya chahiye. Aapka nazariya hi hai jo in cheezon mein zindagi bhar deta hai. Har shabda aapki soch ki gehraai ko chhuta hai. Aapka likhne ka andaaz itna anmol hai ki lagta hai jaise har alfaaz ka apna ek dil ho.

 

[Anshhi]

Fir aayi hai poos ki raat
Gaadhe ki chaadar mein lipata,
dhadhakate seet se simata,
Premachand ka deen heen "halku"
Baitha hai baans ke ussi khatole par,
Jis par baitha hua tha tab,
Munshi ji ne usko racha tha jab !
Khatole ke neeche hai jhabaroo,
Jiski chir niyati hai,
Halku ke sath raat katana,
Uske akaant ko bantana !
Lagaan vasool karne ko kaash
Uss baras "sehana" na aaya hota,
Aur byaaj chukaane ke bajaay,
Halku ek kambal le aaya hota !
Magar tab kaun jaanta usse ?
Bevajah kyon pehchanta usse ?
Seet ki uss raat agar,
Jhabaroo se lipatkar vo na sota,
To kya aaj halku, halku hota ?
Seet ki uss sard raat ka bojh,
Halku aaj tak utha raha hai !
Sehana ka jo karj bacha tha,
Usse ab tak chuka raha hai !
Halku ke paas aaj bhi,
Tan dhaankane ko kambal nahin hai !
Zameendaar beshak badal gaya hai,
Magar karj wahin ka wahin hai !
Kisaan bana rehne ko halku,
Tamaam koshisein kar raha hai !
Fasal ka daam beshak na mile,
Halku khet par Zaade mein mar raha hai !

 

[Yug Purush]

Fir aayi hai poos ki raat
Gaadhe ki chaadar mein lipata,
dhadhakate seet se simata,
Premachand ka deen heen "halku"
Baitha hai baans ke ussi khatole par,
Jis par baitha hua tha tab,
Munshi ji ne usko racha tha jab !
Khatole ke neeche hai jhabaroo,
Jiski chir niyati hai,
Halku ke sath raat katana,
Uske akaant ko bantana !
Lagaan vasool karne ko kaash
Uss baras "sehana" na aaya hota,
Aur byaaj chukaane ke bajaay,
Halku ek kambal le aaya hota !
Magar tab kaun jaanta usse ?
Bevajah kyon pehchanta usse ?
Seet ki uss raat agar,
Jhabaroo se lipatkar vo na sota,
To kya aaj halku, halku hota ?
Seet ki uss sard raat ka bojh,
Halku aaj tak utha raha hai !
Sehana ka jo karj bacha tha,
Usse ab tak chuka raha hai !
Halku ke paas aaj bhi,
Tan dhaankane ko kambal nahin hai !
Zameendaar beshak badal gaya hai,
Magar karj wahin ka wahin hai !
Kisaan bana rehne ko halku,
Tamaam koshisein kar raha hai !
Fasal ka daam beshak na mile,
Halku khet par Zaade mein mar raha hai !

पूस की रात है
चांद को मुस्कराता देख
ठंडी हवाओं ने भी खूब कुलांचें भरी
वो यायावर अपनी ही धुन में
पगडंडी पर अपने संग सर्द रात लिए चलता रहा
गुनगुनाता रहा
पूस की रात है
पेड़ बोल रहे थे
खामोशी को भी शोर की तलब हुई
कुछ रजनीचर अपनी ख्वाहिशें संग लिए
तारोँ से बतियाते रहे
ख़त्म भी ज़रूर होगी
ठंडी और लंबी है तो क्या
पूस की रात है

 

[Yug Purush]

Fir aayi hai poos ki raat
Gaadhe ki chaadar mein lipata,
dhadhakate seet se simata,
Premachand ka deen heen "halku"
Baitha hai baans ke ussi khatole par,
Jis par baitha hua tha tab,
Munshi ji ne usko racha tha jab !
Khatole ke neeche hai jhabaroo,
Jiski chir niyati hai,
Halku ke sath raat katana,
Uske akaant ko bantana !
Lagaan vasool karne ko kaash
Uss baras "sehana" na aaya hota,
Aur byaaj chukaane ke bajaay,
Halku ek kambal le aaya hota !
Magar tab kaun jaanta usse ?
Bevajah kyon pehchanta usse ?
Seet ki uss raat agar,
Jhabaroo se lipatkar vo na sota,
To kya aaj halku, halku hota ?
Seet ki uss sard raat ka bojh,
Halku aaj tak utha raha hai !
Sehana ka jo karj bacha tha,
Usse ab tak chuka raha hai !
Halku ke paas aaj bhi,
Tan dhaankane ko kambal nahin hai !
Zameendaar beshak badal gaya hai,
Magar karj wahin ka wahin hai !
Kisaan bana rehne ko halku,
Tamaam koshisein kar raha hai !
Fasal ka daam beshak na mile,
Halku khet par Zaade mein mar raha hai !

पूस की वो ठंडी रात ,
हल्कू और झबरा थे साथ ।
ठंड से दोनो कांप रहे,
जला अलाव को ताप रहे ।

गरीब किसान हल्कू बेचारा ,
झबरा नामक उसका कुत्ता प्यारा ।
बचाकर रखे थे रुपए तीन
वो भी ले गए कर्जदार छीन

रूपए रखे थे कि कंबल खरीदूंगा,
कर्जदार का पैसा फ़सल पे दूंगा ।
लेकिन कर्जदार कहां रुकने वाले
नहीं तो सहने पड़ेंगे गाली और ताने
अब बेचारा क्या करता
हुआ वही जो डर था

चिलम पीकर समय काटता,
ठंड से बचने के लिए अलाव जलाता,
जैसे तैसे रात बिताता,
अलाव के पास से अब उठा न जाए
खेत को खा जाती फिर नील गाय
सो गया वही धरती पर चादर बिछाकर,
हुआ हैरान खेत को उजड़ा पाकर,
पत्नी बोली बात सुनो जरूरी
अब तो करेंगी दोनों मजदूरी
मन ही मन सोच रहा एक बात
चलो अब नहीं सहनी होगी पूस की रात ।।

 

[Thegodfather]

Fir aayi hai poos ki raat
Gaadhe ki chaadar mein lipata,
dhadhakate seet se simata,
Premachand ka deen heen "halku"
Baitha hai baans ke ussi khatole par,
Jis par baitha hua tha tab,
Munshi ji ne usko racha tha jab !
Khatole ke neeche hai jhabaroo,
Jiski chir niyati hai,
Halku ke sath raat katana,
Uske akaant ko bantana !
Lagaan vasool karne ko kaash
Uss baras "sehana" na aaya hota,
Aur byaaj chukaane ke bajaay,
Halku ek kambal le aaya hota !
Magar tab kaun jaanta usse ?
Bevajah kyon pehchanta usse ?
Seet ki uss raat agar,
Jhabaroo se lipatkar vo na sota,
To kya aaj halku, halku hota ?
Seet ki uss sard raat ka bojh,
Halku aaj tak utha raha hai !
Sehana ka jo karj bacha tha,
Usse ab tak chuka raha hai !
Halku ke paas aaj bhi,
Tan dhaankane ko kambal nahin hai !
Zameendaar beshak badal gaya hai,
Magar karj wahin ka wahin hai !
Kisaan bana rehne ko halku,
Tamaam koshisein kar raha hai !
Fasal ka daam beshak na mile,
Halku khet par Zaade mein mar raha hai !

Wah kya bath