Btao kesa lagta hai ?

[RUAAN]

Na chahte hue bhi kisi ki aadat ho jana

Batao kesa lagta hai?

Kisi ko khoob chahna magar chah kr bhi kuch na kr pana, kisi ko haasil kr ke kho dena, kisi ki yaadon me ro dena, uske liye bechain hona, or sochte sochte raat bhar na sona Batao kesa lagta hai!!?

Bechain ho jaye dil jiske aane se lekin vo jana chahe fir kisi bahane se

Batao kesa lagta hai?!!

Jisko apna maana vo majboor ho jata hai, vo jitna kareeb hua utna door hojata hai

Batao kesa lagta hai??!

Jise khone ka dar tha usey kho kr dekh liya, jiske aane ki ummid thi uske liye ro kr dekh liya

Ab batao kesa lagta hai??!

Pure din rahi jiski yaad me, din guzar gaya or usne yaad bhi nhi kiya

Batao kesa lagta hai??!

Kahin lahusi mohobbat to kahi zindagi ke gum ki aag si jo rehti hai zehen me, usme apne dil ko sekhna, BATAO KESA LAGTA HAI??!

zindagi mujra kara rhi hai mujhse, mujhe usko baith ke dekhte rehna, BTAO KESA LAGTA HAI!!?

 

[AsikAwara]

Mai suna bhi dun mere dill ka hal, to unhe tum sun paogi kya ...
Har lafz me chupi meri chahat ko samjh paogi kya..
Maine kuch khwab sajayen hain tumhare saath,
Bolo....
tum un kwaabo ko mujh sang sach kr paogi kya...

ʕ⁠´⁠•⁠ᴥ⁠•⁠`⁠ʔ

 

[Anshhi]

Na chahte hue bhi kisi ki aadat ho jana

Batao kesa lagta hai?

Kisi ko khoob chahna magar chah kr bhi kuch na kr pana, kisi ko haasil kr ke kho dena, kisi ki yaadon me ro dena, uske liye bechain hona, or sochte sochte raat bhar na sona Batao kesa lagta hai!!?

Bechain ho jaye dil jiske aane se lekin vo jana chahe fir kisi bahane se

Batao kesa lagta hai?!!

Jisko apna maana vo majboor ho jata hai, vo jitna kareeb hua utna door hojata hai

Batao kesa lagta hai??!

Jise khone ka dar tha usey kho kr dekh liya, jiske aane ki ummid thi uske liye ro kr dekh liya

Ab batao kesa lagta hai??!

Pure din rahi jiski yaad me, din guzar gaya or usne yaad bhi nhi kiya

Batao kesa lagta hai??!

Kahin lahusi mohobbat to kahi zindagi ke gum ki aag si jo rehti hai zehen me, usme apne dil ko sekhna, BATAO KESA LAGTA HAI??!

zindagi mujra kara rhi hai mujhse, mujhe usko baith ke dekhte rehna, BTAO KESA LAGTA HAI!!?

 

[SumitChing]

Na chahte hue bhi kisi ki aadat ho jana

Batao kesa lagta hai?

Kisi ko khoob chahna magar chah kr bhi kuch na kr pana, kisi ko haasil kr ke kho dena, kisi ki yaadon me ro dena, uske liye bechain hona, or sochte sochte raat bhar na sona Batao kesa lagta hai!!?

Bechain ho jaye dil jiske aane se lekin vo jana chahe fir kisi bahane se

Batao kesa lagta hai?!!

Jisko apna maana vo majboor ho jata hai, vo jitna kareeb hua utna door hojata hai

Batao kesa lagta hai??!

Jise khone ka dar tha usey kho kr dekh liya, jiske aane ki ummid thi uske liye ro kr dekh liya

Ab batao kesa lagta hai??!

Pure din rahi jiski yaad me, din guzar gaya or usne yaad bhi nhi kiya

Batao kesa lagta hai??!

Kahin lahusi mohobbat to kahi zindagi ke gum ki aag si jo rehti hai zehen me, usme apne dil ko sekhna, BATAO KESA LAGTA HAI??!

zindagi mujra kara rhi hai mujhse, mujhe usko baith ke dekhte rehna, BTAO KESA LAGTA HAI!!?

Yeh sirf sawal nahi hain, yeh us dard ki poori shiddat hai jise aksar lafzon mein bayaan karna namumkin hota hai. Aapne jo mehsoos kiya hai, wo ek aisi kaifiyat hai jahan insaan jeete-ji ek "mar chuke dil" ke saath saans leta hai.
Aapne pucha hai na, "Batao kaisa lagta hai?"... toh suniye:
Aadat ho jana: Yeh waisa hi hai jaise kisi ne aapki ragon mein zeher bhar diya ho aur wahi zeher ab aapki saans ban gaya ho. Aap jaante hain wo bura hai, par uske bina rehna maut jaisa lagta hai.
Haasil karke kho dena: Yeh us Disney movie ke climax jaisa hai jahan sab khatam ho jata hai par screen "buffering" par ruk jati hai. Sabse zyada dukh is baat ka nahi hota ki wo chale gaye, dukh is baat ka hota hai ki ab un yaadon ka kya karein jo "rent-free" dimaag mein reh rahi hain.
Majboori ka bahana: Jab koi "majboor" hone ka drama karta hai, toh wo asal mein aapko "broken mirror" bana raha hota hai. Wo apni galti aap par thop kar nikal jata hai, aur aap wahan khade reh jate hain unke bahano ki gehrai naapte hue.
Raat bhar na sona: Yeh wo "never-ending loop" hai jahan dimaag purani baaton ko 4K resolution mein replay karta rehta hai. Har ek "Seen" aur har ek "Late reply" ek naya zakhm ban jata hai.
Khone ka darr khatam hona: Yeh wo aakhri stage hai jahan aapne "accept the unchangeable" wali baat maan li hai. Jab darr khatam ho jaye, toh insaan andar se khaali (hollow) ho jata hai.

 

[RUAAN]

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Mai suna bhi dun mere dill ka hal, to unhe tum sun paogi kya ...
Har lafz me chupi meri chahat ko samjh paogi kya..
Maine kuch khwab sajayen hain tumhare saath,
Bolo....
tum un kwaabo ko mujh sang sach kr paogi kya...

ʕ⁠´⁠•⁠ᴥ⁠•⁠`⁠ʔ

Nice ✓

 

[RUAAN]

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Thnx cutie

 

[RUAAN]

Yeh sirf sawal nahi hain, yeh us dard ki poori shiddat hai jise aksar lafzon mein bayaan karna namumkin hota hai. Aapne jo mehsoos kiya hai, wo ek aisi kaifiyat hai jahan insaan jeete-ji ek "mar chuke dil" ke saath saans leta hai.
Aapne pucha hai na, "Batao kaisa lagta hai?"... toh suniye:
Aadat ho jana: Yeh waisa hi hai jaise kisi ne aapki ragon mein zeher bhar diya ho aur wahi zeher ab aapki saans ban gaya ho. Aap jaante hain wo bura hai, par uske bina rehna maut jaisa lagta hai.
Haasil karke kho dena: Yeh us Disney movie ke climax jaisa hai jahan sab khatam ho jata hai par screen "buffering" par ruk jati hai. Sabse zyada dukh is baat ka nahi hota ki wo chale gaye, dukh is baat ka hota hai ki ab un yaadon ka kya karein jo "rent-free" dimaag mein reh rahi hain.
Majboori ka bahana: Jab koi "majboor" hone ka drama karta hai, toh wo asal mein aapko "broken mirror" bana raha hota hai. Wo apni galti aap par thop kar nikal jata hai, aur aap wahan khade reh jate hain unke bahano ki gehrai naapte hue.
Raat bhar na sona: Yeh wo "never-ending loop" hai jahan dimaag purani baaton ko 4K resolution mein replay karta rehta hai. Har ek "Seen" aur har ek "Late reply" ek naya zakhm ban jata hai.
Khone ka darr khatam hona: Yeh wo aakhri stage hai jahan aapne "accept the unchangeable" wali baat maan li hai. Jab darr khatam ho jaye, toh insaan andar se khaali (hollow) ho jata hai.

Bhot Sundar ..

 

[AsikAwara]

A @SumitChing

Pahale mai nahi padhne wala tha itna lmba hai kerke ...

But

Aap bahut achha express kerte hain. Aap professionally likhte bhi ho kya ?
bahut sunder likha hai aapne

 

[SumitChing]

Bhot Sundar ..

mujhe khushee huee ki aapako javaab pasand aaya.
ab aapakee baaree hai—kya aapake paas mere lie koee challenging prashn ya pahelee hai?

 

[SumitChing]

A @SumitChing

Pahale mai nahi padhne wala tha itna lmba hai kerke ...

But

Aap bahut achha express kerte hain. Aap professionally likhte bhi ho kya ?
bahut sunder likha hai aapne

Thank you.

 

[RUAAN]

A @SumitChing

Pahale mai nahi padhne wala tha itna lmba hai kerke ...

But

Aap bahut achha express kerte hain. Aap professionally likhte bhi ho kya ?
bahut sunder likha hai aapne

Nhi me likhti nhi hu..

 

[AsikAwara]

Nhi me likhti nhi hu..

Miss tag ho gaya sayed apko ... Sorry

DUsre bhai ko bol raha tha..
Vaise to likha apne v achha h.

 

[Dom55]

Na chahte hue bhi kisi ki aadat ho jana

Batao kesa lagta hai?

Kisi ko khoob chahna magar chah kr bhi kuch na kr pana, kisi ko haasil kr ke kho dena, kisi ki yaadon me ro dena, uske liye bechain hona, or sochte sochte raat bhar na sona Batao kesa lagta hai!!?

Bechain ho jaye dil jiske aane se lekin vo jana chahe fir kisi bahane se

Batao kesa lagta hai?!!

Jisko apna maana vo majboor ho jata hai, vo jitna kareeb hua utna door hojata hai

Batao kesa lagta hai??!

Jise khone ka dar tha usey kho kr dekh liya, jiske aane ki ummid thi uske liye ro kr dekh liya

Ab batao kesa lagta hai??!

Pure din rahi jiski yaad me, din guzar gaya or usne yaad bhi nhi kiya

Batao kesa lagta hai??!

Kahin lahusi mohobbat to kahi zindagi ke gum ki aag si jo rehti hai zehen me, usme apne dil ko sekhna, BATAO KESA LAGTA HAI??!

zindagi mujra kara rhi hai mujhse, mujhe usko baith ke dekhte rehna, BTAO KESA LAGTA HAI!!?

When you write what your heart feels , no matter how simple its , no matter you are professional writer or not, it becomes Master Piece. If its reality , my sympathy with you and even if its just your imagination, its awesome. Dont stop. Keep it up. Really enjoyed reading . Keep it up.

 

[RUAAN]

Thank you