Aankhon ki gustakhi

[aniket22]

Aankhon se aankhon ka silsila chala,
Chup rehkar bhi sab kuch keh gaya,
Yeh gustakhi thi ya kismat ka khel,
Jo pal bhar mein dil unka ho gaya.

 

[Musafir]

Aankhon se aankhon ka silsila chala,
Chup rehkar bhi sab kuch keh gaya,
Yeh gustakhi thi ya kismat ka khel,
Jo pal bhar mein dil unka ho gaya.

Well done @aniket22
Nice lines

 

[aniket22]

Well done @aniket22
Nice lines

Thank you

 

[Musafir]

Vo to honton se kuch kehti hi nahi,
Us ki aankhon me ek kahani hai,
Us kahani me naam hai mera,
Mujh pe kudrat ki meharbaani hai.

 

[Anshhi]

Aankhon se aankhon ka silsila chala,
Chup rehkar bhi sab kuch keh gaya,
Yeh gustakhi thi ya kismat ka khel,
Jo pal bhar mein dil unka ho gaya.

Pure poetic charm in every line.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[Ranadip]

Na koi hamdard thaa na koi dard tha ..fir ek hamdard mila usi se sardard bhi mila

 

[Bishamonten]

I wrote this

Kai raaz hotho ne chupaye hai mere
Kai raaz dil ne dabaye hai mere
Kuch Raaz kitaabo me bhi rakhe maine mehfooz
Magar ye kambakht aankhein....

 

[aniket22]

I wrote this

Kai raaz hotho ne chupaye hai mere
Kai raaz dil ne dabaye hai mere
Kuch Raaz kitaabo me bhi rakhe maine mehfooz
Magar ye kambakht aankhein....

Wah kya baat hai

 

[Bishamonten]

Wah kya baat hai

I don't write aapke jitna accha @aniket22 , bich me kabhi kuch aaye dimaag me to hii, thanks par

 

[Taara001]

Aankhon se aankhon ka silsila chala,
Chup rehkar bhi sab kuch keh gaya,
Yeh gustakhi thi ya kismat ka khel,
Jo pal bhar mein dil unka ho gaya.

Well written

 

[aniket22]

Well written

Thank you

 

[Ashura24]

Aankhon se aankhon ka silsila chala,
Chup rehkar bhi sab kuch keh gaya,
Yeh gustakhi thi ya kismat ka khel,
Jo pal bhar mein dil unka ho gaya.

Unn akho ko dekhe itna zyda nasha chad gya ki dusre chizo ka nasha chadna hi band ho gya .bas ab un akho ko dekhte rehna he .