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INT. TRAUMA ICU – WARD 7 – 7th NIGHT (exactly one week later)

Rain still pounding the windows...
Clock shows 02:14 AM.


The room is quieter now.
Bloodstains are gone...
Bandages clean white.
Only the rhythm of the ventilator and the slow beep… beep… beep…


DR. MEENAKSHI (exhausted, dark circles) stands at the foot of the bed.

DR. MEENAKSHI : 168 hours… 7 full days...Wounds full-ah heal aagiduchu..Scars kooda light pink dhaan irukku... Aana kannu open pannala.
Oru finger kooda twitch pannala...


JUNIOR DOCTOR (whispers) : Ma’am, police side-layum oru missing complaint-um illa...Tamil Nadu, Karnataka, Kerala… full database check pannanga...
Indha aalu yaaru-nu theriyala...
Aana indha body normal human body maari behave pannala...


NURSE @MoonFlare (softly, almost scared)

NURSE @MoonFlare : Night duty-la mattum monitor-la heart rate sudden-ah 180 ku pogum…
3 second… pinna 38 ku drop aagum.

Daily same time 02:17 AM ku.

Close-up on the monitor: 02:16:58… 02:16:59… 02:17:00
Spike. 180 bpm.
Then back to 38.


Everyone freezes. Same thing again.

DR. RAGHURAM @Dom55 :
Enters silently...He’s been sleeping in the hospital for 7 days.


He walks straight to the bed. Places his palm on the patient’s forehead.

DR. RAGHURAM (turns to team) :
Ivanuku per illa. Address illa.. Aana ivan eppo venaalum ezhundhuruva.
Adhu varaikkum...Yaaru kittaiyum sollidathinga... Idhu en responsibility...


He pulls the chart, writes in bold red pen:

DO NOT REMOVE LIFE SUPPORT
DO NOT ALLOW VISITORS
ANY CHANGE – CALL ME FIRST
Dr. Raghuram


He places the chart back, looks at the patient one last time.

He switches off the main light.
Only the green monitor glow remains on the patient’s calm face.


FADE OUT on the rain.

TEXT ON SCREEN:
DAY 7 OF INFINITY
PATIENT: UNKNOWN MALE
STATUS: DEEP COMA → WAITING



INT. TRAUMA ICU – DAY 21 – MORNING

Monsoon-la first break...Sunlight weak-ah window-la varudhu.

The patient is no longer on ventilator.
Tube ellam remove pannitaanga.
Bandages full-ah clean. Scars mattum light silver lines-a irukku.
Breathing normal. Heart rate steady 62 bpm.Aana kannu innum open pannala.

DR. RAGHURAM :stands alone with the bed....Chart-a final-a close pannuran.

DR. RAGHURAM (soft, to the patient) :
21 days da… hospital record break pannita. Wounds full heal. Organs perfect.Aana nee ezhundhukala..Police-kum vendam, media-kum vendam…Inime en veetla dhaan irukkanum.

He turns to the nursing station.
DR. RAGHURAM Discharge summary ready pannunga.
Destination: My residence.
Patient name… leave it blank.
Responsibility: Dr. Raghuram – personal.

NURSE (shocked)

NURSE : Sir… coma patient-a veetuku eduthuttu poga mudiyuma sir?

DR. RAGHURAM (small smile) :
Coma illa sister… deep sleep. Idhukku hospital venam.Idhukku veedu venum.

CUT TO: EXT. RAGHURAM’S HOUSE – BESANT NAGAR – EVENING

Old independent house...
Big garden. Rain just stopped.
Air-la manvasanai...

Ambulance reverse-la varudhu.
Raghuram + 2 male nurses stretcher-a careful-a izhuthu varanga.

Inside the house – A room already converted into mini ICU:

ventilator standby, monitors, oxygen cylinder, everything ready.
They shift the patient to a proper bed near a big window.

Curtains open – sea breeze varudhu...


DR. RAGHURAM (to the unconscious man)


En veedu single-a irundhadhu 52 varsham da…
Inime single illa.. Nee irukka, naan irukken.Eppo venaalum ezhundhu vaa...
Coffee pottu tharen. Adhu varaikkum… naan waiting.

He switches on a small table lamp.
Soft golden light falls on the patient’s calm face...

Outside, the sky clears. First rainbow after 3 weeks.

FADE OUT on the rainbow and the quiet room.

TEXT ON SCREEN:
“DAY 22
LOCATION: HOME
STATUS: STILL UNCONSCIOUS
CARETAKER: DR. RAGHURAM



Thodarum...✨❤️
 
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INT. TRAUMA ICU – WARD 7 – 7th NIGHT (exactly one week later)

Rain still pounding the windows...
Clock shows 02:14 AM.


The room is quieter now.
Bloodstains are gone...
Bandages clean white.
Only the rhythm of the ventilator and the slow beep… beep… beep…


DR. MEENAKSHI (exhausted, dark circles) stands at the foot of the bed.

DR. MEENAKSHI : 168 hours… 7 full days...Wounds full-ah heal aagiduchu..Scars kooda light pink dhaan irukku... Aana kannu open pannala.
Oru finger kooda twitch pannala...


JUNIOR DOCTOR (whispers) : Ma’am, police side-layum oru missing complaint-um illa...Tamil Nadu, Karnataka, Kerala… full database check pannanga...
Indha aalu yaaru-nu theriyala...
Aana indha body normal human body maari behave pannala...


NURSE @MoonFlare (softly, almost scared)

NURSE @MoonFlare : Night duty-la mattum monitor-la heart rate sudden-ah 180 ku pogum…
3 second… pinna 38 ku drop aagum.

Daily same time 02:17 AM ku.

Close-up on the monitor: 02:16:58… 02:16:59… 02:17:00
Spike. 180 bpm.
Then back to 38.


Everyone freezes. Same thing again.

DR. RAGHURAM @Dom55 :
Enters silently...He’s been sleeping in the hospital for 7 days.


He walks straight to the bed. Places his palm on the patient’s forehead.

DR. RAGHURAM (turns to team) :
Ivanuku per illa. Address illa.. Aana ivan eppo venaalum ezhundhuruva.
Adhu varaikkum...Yaaru kittaiyum sollidathinga... Idhu en responsibility...


He pulls the chart, writes in bold red pen:

DO NOT REMOVE LIFE SUPPORT
DO NOT ALLOW VISITORS
ANY CHANGE – CALL ME FIRST
Dr. Raghuram


He places the chart back, looks at the patient one last time.

He switches off the main light.
Only the green monitor glow remains on the patient’s calm face.


FADE OUT on the rain.

TEXT ON SCREEN:
DAY 7 OF INFINITY
PATIENT: UNKNOWN MALE
STATUS: DEEP COMA → WAITING




Inside the house – A room already converted into mini ICU:


ventilator standby, monitors, oxygen cylinder, everything ready.
They shift the patient to a proper bed near a big window.

Curtains open – sea breeze varudhu...


DR. RAGHURAM (to the unconscious man)


En veedu single-a irundhadhu 52 varsham da…
Inime single illa.. Nee irukka, naan irukken.Eppo venaalum ezhundhu vaa...
Coffee pottu tharen. Adhu varaikkum… naan waiting.

He switches on a small table lamp.
Soft golden light falls on the patient’s calm face...

Outside, the sky clears. First rainbow after 3 weeks.

FADE OUT on the rainbow and the quiet room.

TEXT ON SCREEN:
“DAY 22
LOCATION: HOME
STATUS: STILL UNCONSCIOUS
CARETAKER: DR. RAGHURAM



Thodarum...✨❤️
Enaku purinju pochu..
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INT. TRAUMA ICU – WARD 7 – 7th NIGHT (exactly one week later)

Rain still pounding the windows...
Clock shows 02:14 AM.


The room is quieter now.
Bloodstains are gone...
Bandages clean white.
Only the rhythm of the ventilator and the slow beep… beep… beep…


DR. MEENAKSHI (exhausted, dark circles) stands at the foot of the bed.

DR. MEENAKSHI : 168 hours… 7 full days...Wounds full-ah heal aagiduchu..Scars kooda light pink dhaan irukku... Aana kannu open pannala.
Oru finger kooda twitch pannala...


JUNIOR DOCTOR (whispers) : Ma’am, police side-layum oru missing complaint-um illa...Tamil Nadu, Karnataka, Kerala… full database check pannanga...
Indha aalu yaaru-nu theriyala...
Aana indha body normal human body maari behave pannala...


NURSE @MoonFlare (softly, almost scared)

NURSE @MoonFlare : Night duty-la mattum monitor-la heart rate sudden-ah 180 ku pogum…
3 second… pinna 38 ku drop aagum.

Daily same time 02:17 AM ku.

Close-up on the monitor: 02:16:58… 02:16:59… 02:17:00
Spike. 180 bpm.
Then back to 38.


Everyone freezes. Same thing again.

DR. RAGHURAM @Dom55 :
Enters silently...He’s been sleeping in the hospital for 7 days.


He walks straight to the bed. Places his palm on the patient’s forehead.

DR. RAGHURAM (turns to team) :
Ivanuku per illa. Address illa.. Aana ivan eppo venaalum ezhundhuruva.
Adhu varaikkum...Yaaru kittaiyum sollidathinga... Idhu en responsibility...


He pulls the chart, writes in bold red pen:

DO NOT REMOVE LIFE SUPPORT
DO NOT ALLOW VISITORS
ANY CHANGE – CALL ME FIRST
Dr. Raghuram


He places the chart back, looks at the patient one last time.

He switches off the main light.
Only the green monitor glow remains on the patient’s calm face.


FADE OUT on the rain.

TEXT ON SCREEN:
DAY 7 OF INFINITY
PATIENT: UNKNOWN MALE
STATUS: DEEP COMA → WAITING




INT. TRAUMA ICU – DAY 21 – MORNING

Monsoon-la first break...Sunlight weak-ah window-la varudhu.

The patient is no longer on ventilator.
Tube ellam remove pannitaanga.
Bandages full-ah clean. Scars mattum light silver lines-a irukku.
Breathing normal. Heart rate steady 62 bpm.Aana kannu innum open pannala.


DR. RAGHURAM :stands alone with the bed....Chart-a final-a close pannuran.

DR. RAGHURAM (soft, to the patient) :
21 days da… hospital record break pannita. Wounds full heal. Organs perfect.Aana nee ezhundhukala..Police-kum vendam, media-kum vendam…Inime en veetla dhaan irukkanum.


He turns to the nursing station.
DR. RAGHURAM Discharge summary ready pannunga.
Destination: My residence.
Patient name… leave it blank.
Responsibility: Dr. Raghuram – personal.


NURSE (shocked)

NURSE : Sir… coma patient-a veetuku eduthuttu poga mudiyuma sir?

DR. RAGHURAM (small smile) :
Coma illa sister… deep sleep. Idhukku hospital venam.Idhukku veedu venum.


CUT TO: EXT. RAGHURAM’S HOUSE – BESANT NAGAR – EVENING

Old independent house...
Big garden. Rain just stopped.
Air-la manvasanai...


Ambulance reverse-la varudhu.
Raghuram + 2 male nurses stretcher-a careful-a izhuthu varanga.

Inside the house – A room already converted into mini ICU:

ventilator standby, monitors, oxygen cylinder, everything ready.
They shift the patient to a proper bed near a big window.

Curtains open – sea breeze varudhu...


DR. RAGHURAM (to the unconscious man)


En veedu single-a irundhadhu 52 varsham da…
Inime single illa.. Nee irukka, naan irukken.Eppo venaalum ezhundhu vaa...
Coffee pottu tharen. Adhu varaikkum… naan waiting.

He switches on a small table lamp.
Soft golden light falls on the patient’s calm face...

Outside, the sky clears. First rainbow after 3 weeks.

FADE OUT on the rainbow and the quiet room.

TEXT ON SCREEN:
“DAY 22
LOCATION: HOME
STATUS: STILL UNCONSCIOUS
CARETAKER: DR. RAGHURAM



Thodarum...✨❤️
Edited version.. Paathukonga makkale
 

INT. RAGHURAM VEEDU – 45th DAY – KAALAI

Hero @Indrajith: kannu open pannuran.

Nurse Odi poyu doctor Raghuram ah koopdranga...Dr. Antha patient kannu muzhichitaaru..
Dr rushing to his room...
Padhatta padatha porumai...


HERO @Indrajith : Idhu enna idam.... Neenga??

RAGHURAM : En veedu thaan...Naan Dr Raghuram. (Avan eppadi vanthannu full story solraru)

HERO @Indrajith :
45 days aacha...naan bike la varappa antha aala maram kitta enna naalu anju peru adichu pottaanga.. Adhu arai nyabagam irukku...Naan en lover ah paaka ava veetuku poitu irunthen.. Love matter veetuku therinju avanga annan enna pesa vara solliruntharu...

Ennaku oru address solren… ippo kootittu poga mudiyuma...

Dr Raghuram : avanga phone no edhum iruka.. Call pannalam...

Hero @Indrajith : Phone no edhum illaye... Address nyabagam iruku...
Pls enna kootitu poreengala?

Dr Raghuram : Sari ok..kootitu poren.. Vaa polaam...


EXT. VEEDU – 10 MIN KAZHICHI

Car-la hero erumpodhu car kitta vanthadhdum sunlight car glass-la reflect aagudhu...
Hero sudden-a kaiya kannu-ku munnadi vachu light-a block pannuran,
Hero full drowsy, medicines + long coma effect


INT. CAR – MOVING

Hero pin seat-la thala soichu half sleep-la.

EXT. ADDRESS – LATE NOON

Car oru veedu munnala niruthudhu.
Hero full alert aayittu iranguran...


Hero @Indrajith (white kurta-pajama) steps out confidently, presses the calling bell.

Gate opens. A lady around 50 years (saree, simple) comes out...

LADY @●❤♡ Kê_ñï§hå ♡❤● :Yaaru neenga?

HERO @Indrajith : Shalini irukkala? Naan ava kooda padicha payyan...Nanga love panrom. Veetla pesa vara sonna...(incomplete sentence)

LADY @●❤♡ Kê_ñï§hå ♡❤● (shock): Edhu? Love-ah?
Enakku idhu ellam share pannave illa...
Iru… koopdren.


She turns inside and calls.

LADY @●❤♡ Kê_ñï§hå ♡❤● : Shalini! Inga vaa maa....
A girl (25-26) comes out.

HERO @Indrajith (to the girl) : Hi Shalini… Enga?

SHALINI @MaLLiPoo :Naan dhaan Shalini. Neenga yaaru?

HERO @Indrajith : Idhu indha address dhaane? Confirm pannuren.

SHALINI @MaLLiPoo : Aama, same dhaan.

HERO : Neenga recent-a shift aagi vandheengala?

LADY @●❤♡ Kê_ñï§hå ♡❤●: Illa pa… poorviga veedu. 60 varsham mela irukkom.

Hero takes one step back, confused...

HERO @Indrajith : Address correct… aana naan thedi vandhadhu neenga illa.
Loyola College-la 1994-98 batch, B.Sc Computer Science-la padicha Shalini-a thedi vandhen...
En peyar Vignesh...


Suddenly “CLANG!” – something falls from the lady’s hand.
A steel tumbler rolls on the floor.


LADY@●❤♡ Kê_ñï§hå ♡❤●(hands shaking) : Nee enna solra….

LADY@●❤♡ Kê_ñï§hå ♡❤●(voice breaking) : Neeyaa…?
Ennada solra… Nee solra Shalini… naan dhaan.Idhu en annan ponnu.
En name dhaan vachirukan en annan avalukku...Aana nee solradhu ellam…30 varsham munnaadi da…


Hero slowly turns, sees a mirror on the compound wall for the first time after coma.

Close-up: mirror-la his face paakraan...


HERO @Indrajith (whispers, then screams) : Ayyo… yaar idhu… Idhu naane illa...!!!

He stumbles back, Raghuram catches him.

FADE OUT on hero’s shocked face in the mirror...

Thodarum...✨❤️
 
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