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The Candy Shop

The Assassin

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Iliana was at her favourite candy shop
So much candy in her basket she couldn't stop
She took more as she licked and sucked a lollipop

The man said , "Hey , no eating the candy without paying!"
Iliana to busy she didn't hear what he was saying


Her basket almost overflowing with candy

Iliana had a bag in her pocket , it came in handy

"I'll have no candy left at this rate" sighed the man
Iliana filled her bag with as much candy as she can


She almost emptied the entire shelf
The man said ,"You going to eat all that by yourself?"


Iliana nodded as she sucked her lollipop
Then suddenly her bag full of candy went "POP!"


She took out another bag and put the candy inside
Iliana payed for the candy then went outside


She walked through the streets as fast as she could
She began to eat a few pieces they tasted so good


Iliana arrived home then closed the door

She'd eaten so much she lay on the floor
Still feeling hungry she wanted more

Iliana continued to chew and munch

She became so full and now there's no room for lunch

Still laying there on the floor
So full of candy she could barely move anymore


Her dog came in and sniffed around
Then it took some candy that was on the ground


The dog ate her candy as the light made it's eyes shine
Iliana said "hey that candy is mine!"
 
Iliana was at her favourite candy shop
So much candy in her basket she couldn't stop
She took more as she licked and sucked a lollipop

The man said , "Hey , no eating the candy without paying!"
Iliana to busy she didn't hear what he was saying


Her basket almost overflowing with candy
Iliana had a bag in her pocket , it came in handy

"I'll have no candy left at this rate" sighed the man
Iliana filled her bag with as much candy as she can


She almost emptied the entire shelf
The man said ,"You going to eat all that by yourself?"


Iliana nodded as she sucked her lollipop
Then suddenly her bag full of candy went "POP!"


She took out another bag and put the candy inside
Iliana payed for the candy then went outside


She walked through the streets as fast as she could
She began to eat a few pieces they tasted so good


Iliana arrived home then closed the door

She'd eaten so much she lay on the floor
Still feeling hungry she wanted more

Iliana continued to chew and munch
She became so full and now there's no room for lunch


Still laying there on the floor
So full of candy she could barely move anymore


Her dog came in and sniffed around
Then it took some candy that was on the ground


The dog ate her candy as the light made it's eyes shine
Iliana said "hey that candy is mine!"
Reading this reminded me of my childhood days of eating candy. Beautifully written!
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Iliana was at her favourite candy shop
So much candy in her basket she couldn't stop
She took more as she licked and sucked a lollipop

The man said , "Hey , no eating the candy without paying!"
Iliana to busy she didn't hear what he was saying


Her basket almost overflowing with candy
Iliana had a bag in her pocket , it came in handy

"I'll have no candy left at this rate" sighed the man
Iliana filled her bag with as much candy as she can


She almost emptied the entire shelf
The man said ,"You going to eat all that by yourself?"


Iliana nodded as she sucked her lollipop
Then suddenly her bag full of candy went "POP!"


She took out another bag and put the candy inside
Iliana payed for the candy then went outside


She walked through the streets as fast as she could
She began to eat a few pieces they tasted so good


Iliana arrived home then closed the door

She'd eaten so much she lay on the floor
Still feeling hungry she wanted more

Iliana continued to chew and munch
She became so full and now there's no room for lunch


Still laying there on the floor
So full of candy she could barely move anymore


Her dog came in and sniffed around
Then it took some candy that was on the ground


The dog ate her candy as the light made it's eyes shine
Iliana said "hey that candy is mine!"
So full of candy she could barely move anymore...’ — Honestly, relatable! Love the playful tone of this entire piece. Great job!
 
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