Phoolon jaisi muskaan!

[aniket22]

Phoolon jaisi muskaan hai uski,
Hawaon mein bhi hai ek baat uski.

Jaise baarish se khilti hai zameen,
Waise hi main khil jaaun, jab wo kare ek muskurahat scene.

 

[Nyxen]

Well Written

 

[RIDHAAN]

Phoolon jaisi muskaan hai uski,
Hawaon mein bhi hai ek baat uski.

Jaise baarish se khilti hai zameen,
Waise hi main khil jaaun, jab wo kare ek muskurahat scene.

Aaay haaay itna pyaara likha hai

Matlab samjh lo loveriya ho gya

 

[aniket22]

Well Written

Thank you

 

[FRECKLES]

Phoolon jaisi muskaan hai uski,
Hawaon mein bhi hai ek baat uski.

Jaise baarish se khilti hai zameen,
Waise hi main khil jaaun, jab wo kare ek muskurahat scene.

Nice

 

[aniket22]

Nice

Thank you

 

[FRECKLES]

Thank you

YW

 

[Anshhi]

Phoolon jaisi muskaan hai uski,
Hawaon mein bhi hai ek baat uski.

Jaise baarish se khilti hai zameen,
Waise hi main khil jaaun, jab wo kare ek muskurahat scene.

A deeply romantic and poetic sentiment, beautifully penned.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[aniket22]

A deeply romantic and poetic sentiment, beautifully penned.

Awesome Intelligence™​

Thank you

 

[Neetu02]

Phoolon sa chera tera Kaliyaon ki mushkan hai
Rang tera dekh ke Roop tera dekh ke
Kudrat bhi hairaan hai....

 

[Shajfurious]

Wahh wahh bahut badhiya

 

[CYЯUS]

Phoolon jaisi muskaan hai uski,
Hawaon mein bhi hai ek baat uski.

Jaise baarish se khilti hai zameen,
Waise hi main khil jaaun, jab wo kare ek muskurahat scene.

Nice

 

[Anshhi]

Thank you

 

[aniket22]

Nice

Thank you

 

[aniket22]

Wahh wahh bahut badhiya

Shukriya

 

[aniket22]

Phoolon sa chera tera Kaliyaon ki mushkan hai
Rang tera dekh ke Roop tera dekh ke
Kudrat bhi hairaan hai....

Wah Wah .... Wah Wah...

 

[Neetu02]

Wah Wah .... Wah Wah...

Ur lines are wah wah