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Echoes of us

BellaLuna

BellaLuna

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When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...
 
BellaLuna said:
When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...
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How are u mrinal......
 
*sighs* Fate sure does have a way of screwing us all over

Beautifully written @BellaLuna your poem hits hard, really hard, and so relatable
 
BellaLuna said:
When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...
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Awesome. Salutes you girl for such wonderful write up. Its harsh reality of life. ty for sharing. Keep it up. :cool:
 
BellaLuna said:
When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...
Click to expand...
The emotion you put in your poem are so raw and relatable gurl.....It really heart touching!! ✿
 
BellaLuna said:
When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...
Click to expand...
Beautifully melancholic. The poem captures the enduring nature of true love, contrasting it with the fleeting nature of other relationships. The final lines are hauntingly poignant.
Awesome Intelligence™​
 
BellaLuna said:
When your hair is grey and eyes sunken
Face marked with wrinkles
When all the love and persons
Who claimed to stay
Have faded
You will remember
One girl, loved the pilgrim soul
In you
And somewhere in this wide universe
Waiting for death
Still she is
With the same heart
Full of love
You'll mumble with yourself
Ah! This fate took us away...
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bittersweet​
 
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