Shaam Ka Safar Aur Suraj Ka Waada

[aniket22]

Shaam dhalti hai kuch is tarah,
Jaise khwabon ne pehna ho suraj ka gehra rang.
Aasmaan pe likhi jaati hai koi khamosh kahani,
Jisme dard bhi hai, aur sukoon bhi hai sang.

Suraj chhupta nahi, bas thoda ruk jaata hai,
Kal phir milega, yeh vaada kar jaata hai.
Har sunset ek yaad sa chhod jaata hai,
Aur dil ko thoda aur gehra bana jaata hai.

 

[Shajfurious]

Nice keep writing

 

[aniket22]

Nice keep writing

Thank you

 

[Neetu02]

Nice ..

 

[aniket22]

Nice ..

Thank you

 

[Anshhi]

Shaam dhalti hai kuch is tarah,
Jaise khwabon ne pehna ho suraj ka gehra rang.
Aasmaan pe likhi jaati hai koi khamosh kahani,
Jisme dard bhi hai, aur sukoon bhi hai sang.

Suraj chhupta nahi, bas thoda ruk jaata hai,
Kal phir milega, yeh vaada kar jaata hai.
Har sunset ek yaad sa chhod jaata hai,
Aur dil ko thoda aur gehra bana jaata hai.

 

[aniket22]

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Thank you

 

[Anshhi]

Thank you

 

[FRECKLES]

Shaam dhalti hai kuch is tarah,
Jaise khwabon ne pehna ho suraj ka gehra rang.
Aasmaan pe likhi jaati hai koi khamosh kahani,
Jisme dard bhi hai, aur sukoon bhi hai sang.

Suraj chhupta nahi, bas thoda ruk jaata hai,
Kal phir milega, yeh vaada kar jaata hai.
Har sunset ek yaad sa chhod jaata hai,
Aur dil ko thoda aur gehra bana jaata hai.

Well written

 

[Samshady]

Shaam dhalti hai kuch is tarah,
Jaise khwabon ne pehna ho suraj ka gehra rang.
Aasmaan pe likhi jaati hai koi khamosh kahani,
Jisme dard bhi hai, aur sukoon bhi hai sang.

Suraj chhupta nahi, bas thoda ruk jaata hai,
Kal phir milega, yeh vaada kar jaata hai.
Har sunset ek yaad sa chhod jaata hai,
Aur dil ko thoda aur gehra bana jaata hai.

keep writing bro
acha likhte ho

 

[aniket22]

keep writing bro
acha likhte ho

Thanks bro