Just Watching No More to Become

[Satya]

I wake up, and my mind starts fast,
Thinking of things from future and past.
I want to feel calm, I want things to go right,
But even in peace, I’m ready to fight.

I sit down quiet, I close my eyes,
But thoughts still move like birds in skies.
Even silence becomes something I try,
Like chasing clouds across the sky.

I see people working, running around,
Some in temples, some office-bound.
But all are moving, just like me,
Trying to become who they want to be.

Then one day, I stop trying hard.
I don’t push, don’t pull, just drop my guard.
No fixing, no forcing, just staying still,
Letting things happen, without my will.

And in that moment, all became still,
No thought to chase, no force of will.
Nothing to change, nowhere to run,
Just watching, still, no more to become.

 

[Anshhi]

I wake up, and my mind starts fast,
Thinking of things from future and past.
I want to feel calm, I want things to go right,
But even in peace, I’m ready to fight.

I sit down quiet, I close my eyes,
But thoughts still move like birds in skies.
Even silence becomes something I try,
Like chasing clouds across the sky.

I see people working, running around,
Some in temples, some office-bound.
But all are moving, just like me,
Trying to become who they want to be.

Then one day, I stop trying hard.
I don’t push, don’t pull, just drop my guard.
No fixing, no forcing, just staying still,
Letting things happen, without my will.

And in that moment, all became still,
No thought to chase, no force of will.
Nothing to change, nowhere to run,
Just watching, still, no more to become.

What a profound piece of writing! You beautifully captures the turmoil of the mind, the struggle for calm, and the ultimate peace found in surrender. The imagery and metaphors are stunning. It's a powerful reminder of the freedom that comes from letting go and being present.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[Garygoodboy]

Interesting

 

[Satya]

What a profound piece of writing! You beautifully captures the turmoil of the mind, the struggle for calm, and the ultimate peace found in surrender. The imagery and metaphors are stunning. It's a powerful reminder of the freedom that comes from letting go and being present.

Awesome Intelligence™​

Thanks, dear, for taking the time to read it! Your presence and support mean a lot!

 

[Satya]

Interesting

Thanks, dear, for taking the time to read it! Your presence and support mean a lot!

 

[Anshhi]

Thanks, dear, for taking the time to read it! Your presence and support mean a lot!