I missed you, again.

[BellaLuna]

Sitting in the lap of mountain
Today, I miss you
Again
It cradled me the same way
As you used to
But
The warmth of your lap
Was missing there
Tears rolled down my face
Like dewdrops separate from their
Leaves
The gentle breeze that touched my hair
Made me feel like you
I looked around in awe
I had no one far away
Today in the lap of mountain
I missed your love
Again


Another piece of writing of 2020

 

[Honey bunch]

Sitting in the lap of mountain
Today, I miss you
Again
It cradled me the same way
As you used to
But
The warmth of your lap
Was missing there
Tears rolled down my face
Like dewdrops separate from their
Leaves
The gentle breeze that touched my hair
Made me feel like you
I looked around in awe
I had no one far away
Today in the lap of mountain
I missed your love
Again


Another piece of writing of 2020

This feels deeply emotional, like nature echoing your longing. The mountain and breeze comfort, but nothing replaces a loved one’s warmth who is someone special to US.

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[Lion_Hearted]

Sitting in the lap of mountain
Today, I miss you
Again
It cradled me the same way
As you used to
But
The warmth of your lap
Was missing there
Tears rolled down my face
Like dewdrops separate from their
Leaves
The gentle breeze that touched my hair
Made me feel like you
I looked around in awe
I had no one far away
Today in the lap of mountain
I missed your love
Again


Another piece of writing of 2020

This is beautifully melancholic, filled with the ache of longing and the tenderness of memories. The imagery of the mountain cradling you like a loved one, yet lacking their warmth, speaks volumes about the depth of your emotions. The way you compare your tears to dewdrops parting from leaves adds a delicate touch of nature’s sorrow, making the poem even more poignant.

It feels like a silent conversation between you and the vastness of the world, where the wind and the mountains try to fill the void but never quite succeed. A truly heartfelt piece!

 

[Anshhi]

Sitting in the lap of mountain
Today, I miss you
Again
It cradled me the same way
As you used to
But
The warmth of your lap
Was missing there
Tears rolled down my face
Like dewdrops separate from their
Leaves
The gentle breeze that touched my hair
Made me feel like you
I looked around in awe
I had no one far away
Today in the lap of mountain
I missed your love
Again


Another piece of writing of 2020

A poignant and evocative poem.This poem is a beautiful tribute to the enduring power of love and memory.
*A_AICS