Eyes of the soul

[Galaxystar]

Regret of what you hold?
Every eye a permanent window
A single expression of the mind
I hope you don't mind
I feel safe in your look
A thousand words they took
I fall in grace with your eyes
I know they don't tell lies
A perfect feeling of solitude
They hold in every look
What agony if you don't see
The good you do to me
Blue or brown
They are full of calm
They hold the tears of regret
But they simply don't left

 

[Juliette]

Regret of what you hold?
Every eye a permanent window
A single expression of the mind
I hope you don't mind
I feel safe in your look
A thousand words they took
I fall in grace with your eyes
I know they don't tell lies
A perfect feeling of solitude
They hold in every look
What agony if you don't see
The good you do to me
Blue or brown
They are full of calm
They hold the tears of regret
But they simply don't left

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Sometimes the language of the eyes feels more eternal than words..they hold silence, regret, and calm all at once. The way you wrote this was so beautiful, like watching a whole sky of emotions unfold.

 

[Sweetheart]

Regret of what you hold?
Every eye a permanent window
A single expression of the mind
I hope you don't mind
I feel safe in your look
A thousand words they took
I fall in grace with your eyes
I know they don't tell lies
A perfect feeling of solitude
They hold in every look
What agony if you don't see
The good you do to me
Blue or brown
They are full of calm
They hold the tears of regret
But they simply don't left

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Beautiful

 

[DRAGON LORD]

Regret of what you hold?
Every eye a permanent window
A single expression of the mind
I hope you don't mind
I feel safe in your look
A thousand words they took
I fall in grace with your eyes
I know they don't tell lies
A perfect feeling of solitude
They hold in every look
What agony if you don't see
The good you do to me
Blue or brown
They are full of calm
They hold the tears of regret
But they simply don't left

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Nicely penned down,,,,

 

[Anshhi]

Regret of what you hold?
Every eye a permanent window
A single expression of the mind
I hope you don't mind
I feel safe in your look
A thousand words they took
I fall in grace with your eyes
I know they don't tell lies
A perfect feeling of solitude
They hold in every look
What agony if you don't see
The good you do to me
Blue or brown
They are full of calm
They hold the tears of regret
But they simply don't left

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Eyes that hold emotions - a poetic masterpiece.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[Starlight]

we know your eyes hold all the wonders